The Dynasty
Junior Member
Ay I'm the best you ever heard about, fresher than you heard about
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Post by The Dynasty on Aug 25, 2007 16:45:29 GMT -5
MY PPV rps.feed my back .negative positive whatever i can take.get back at me.por favor ;D
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Post by ~*The Pride of Ireland*~ on Aug 26, 2007 18:16:21 GMT -5
For your side effect rps, i am confused on how to advance towards this. Because in a way you did introduce the characters when they first spoke, and then just counted on the color of their text to identify them, much like a Documentary set up. Which is perfectly fine, so it would be just nit picking to tell you to label them each time they speak, because its no longer necessary.
So hm...its difficult to tell you in ways to improve. So i guess that means your doing a damn fine job! lets leave it at that for now, and i will try to come up with something somewhere down the line.
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