Just a little feedback please

[The Modern Outlaw]

Ok, well as you all probably know by now Johnny is back and hopefully better than ever. I know I have only posted one RP, and it has little to do with any actual wrestling other than building up my return to action., but this time I tried a little bit different approach. A few months ago when Johnny Mental started this column he had a list of pointers that anyone could use to improve their rp's. Number one on that list was no using the most overused phrase in e-fedding "the scene opens". Since then, I have tried many different things to open my roleplays. From having cars screech to a halt to jumping right into a conversation. This last one though I took more of a storytelling approach and I wanna know if anyone thinks my rp's have improved any since I started or what? You can be as brutally honest as you want, b/c this is just a hobby and I am not gonna be offended by anything said on here.

[Jordan "Bullet Proof" Glass]

You've improved, a lot. I really enjoy your roleplays, I must say. The only bit of advice I have, is to take a page out of Jason, mine or most other roleplayers book, and label who is saying what. Other than that, I have absolutly nothing else to say because there is no other problems I can see with this 'new' style of roleplaying for you.

[The Modern Outlaw]

I'd been wondering if that was making it a little confusing, so I will take care of that. Thanx for the help and I like ur rp's as welll no matter what anyone says lol.

[~*The Pride of Ireland*~]

Your rp style reminds me alot of Wolfes. And he is damn good so that is also a compliment. Like Jordan said, knowing who said what is alot easier for us to understand. I am personally very happy to see you back because we can work around your character under just about any division in XVI, and it will make sense!

[The Modern Outlaw]

;D coolness