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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Jul 14, 2007 7:46:06 GMT -5
for my latest RP...
mostly dialogue but meh
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Post by ~*The Pride of Ireland*~ on Jul 14, 2007 19:16:37 GMT -5
I think you did a very nice roleplay, i prefer lots of dialogue because i tend to skip all the descriptions and get straight to the meat of the roleplay. I get alot of his attitude and such, but there is something about the style that i dont like. I dont mean the formatting, more of the trash talk. I tend to like the kind of roleplay that builds up your opponent with accolades or giving credit where credit is due, and then tearing them down about how much better you are and how they have no chance. Instead it was more or less just calling your opponents "nothing" a half dozen times and trying to make it seem like you might as well be fighting a jobber. It makes the match more interesting when it becomes more a virtual pick em, rather than just The Xtreme Champ vs. Two Nobodies.
But otherwise its a very good dialogue roleplay, plenty of meat without dragging on at all. I like it alot.
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Post by Jordan "Bullet Proof" Glass on Jul 14, 2007 22:04:16 GMT -5
Liked it. Same as Corp though, the dragging out the nothings thing got a little old. Overall, good RP though.
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