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Post by prozac on Jun 16, 2007 2:01:56 GMT -5
There are grammar errors, but I did not feel like going threw it and correcting them because it's 3 i the morning and I'm tired.
But thoughts on the RP would be welcomed
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Post by Jordan "Bullet Proof" Glass on Jun 16, 2007 12:41:43 GMT -5
I really like it, you've gotten better since the last time I read one of you RP's. The only problem I had, and you already said this, is the grammer. Aside from that, it's great.
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Post by prozac on Jun 16, 2007 12:50:55 GMT -5
gotten better? This was crap compared to my good stuff  |
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