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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Jun 4, 2007 19:35:22 GMT -5
More of a CD, but i wanted something up for Side Effedct this week, I've been low on time and that's what you get.
I'm going for a Degenerate turn... you know how it is
anyway comments critiques always welcome... after all thats how you improve
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Post by Jordan "Bullet Proof" Glass on Jun 4, 2007 20:34:21 GMT -5
Calaz .. I haven't really been paying much attention to you lately around here, but DAMN. I have to keep and eye on you, you may just be competing against me once again some day soon. I'll look forward to it. The only real advice I have, and a lot of people around here need this too, is don't get comma happy. Try not to make run on sentences, and also, try to cut down on the '...' content. Really, that's the only thing I have to say man. Nice job, keep up the good work. Just my two cents, 'eh Calaz? PS;; LOVED THE FOB ;D
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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Jun 5, 2007 9:05:54 GMT -5
Your suck a suck up...
But we all love you
Well me and chan do anyway lol
thanks for teh comments/advise
anymore?
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