Tips, Not Exaltion.

[Jordan "Bullet Proof" Glass]

I need help on how to improve. It seems to me I'm staying at the same level, and I need to get better if I want to be on top.

I'd like some feedback on

|. It's Coming Back .| and |. A Face, A Front, A Formidable Opponent .| but most of all I want some real heavy feedback on my latest one. |. Stay Over Night, Tuck Me In Tight .|

Thanks to everyone who replies here. Anyone who doesn't, be prepared to be added to my 'Those Who Have Fallen Prey' list. Thank you.

|. It's Coming Back .| - xvintent.proboards54.com/index.cgi?board=serp&action=display&thread=1178675216

|. A Face, A Front, A Formidable Opponent .| - xvintent.proboards54.com/index.cgi?board=serp&action=display&thread=1179022371

|. Stay Over Night, Tuck Me In Tight .| - xvintent.proboards54.com/index.cgi?board=serp&action=display&thread=1179109158[/center][/b]

[The One]

Jordan you are on the right track with your RPs and that is where it get's difficult to improve. To get better you just have to make your RPs more entertaining, as you think that you have started to level off after peaking you should begin to increase your lengths by adding more commentary or adding in faults of opposing characters now is when the creative juices need to start flowing.