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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Mar 22, 2007 18:45:46 GMT -5
Give feedback on my roleplay and what you think of me going heel, constructive critisism is wanted as always
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Post by Jordan "Bullet Proof" Glass on Mar 22, 2007 19:32:30 GMT -5
I read it, and it's quite good. Just a couple spelling errors, grammer mistakes, punctuation mistakes. Y'know, the usual. But besides that, it's real good.
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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Mar 23, 2007 3:08:41 GMT -5
thanks for the feedback dude (Y)
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Post by versageflames on Mar 23, 2007 7:03:24 GMT -5
Pretty coo pretty coo. I like the way it was done, sorta surprised me but everyones gotta have that period where their character is a complete and utter asshole xD Trust me i've done it before in other Roleplays to. Keep it up man I think our fight will be entertaining.
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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Mar 23, 2007 19:33:50 GMT -5
once again thanks for the feedback people, and yeah beating you will be fuin (Y)...only joking dude, let the best man win
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Post by versageflames on Mar 24, 2007 12:40:39 GMT -5
=P Who ever wins wins, no harm ho foul lol
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Post by G-Dawg on Mar 25, 2007 8:49:36 GMT -5
I think it was a bit too generic. Granted some say that there aren't many ways to do it, but simply "turning" on the fans during an RP seems to be a bit too common for me, but maybe thats just me.
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Post by Destroyer Unleased on Mar 25, 2007 8:59:14 GMT -5
yeah I agree with Dawg. It was well written but too generic...
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Post by "The New Era Icon" David Calaz on Mar 25, 2007 12:43:25 GMT -5
G-Dawg is just scared of me mwuhahahah...o/j dude
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